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02222021-APC- Fibromyalgia
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widespread pain
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Abhishek Rakshit

has been used 3 times in the 2 and 3rd paragraphs. need new phrase
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Affecting women more than it does men
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@sandishaworks@gmail.com Starting needs rephrasing
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said
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"found to be"?
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t is also said to be
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Abhishek Rakshit

Maybe "Experts believe it is the second"
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Add: “[FDA]”
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Replace: “is an extreme and chronic widespread pain condition that is” with “can be”
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the removed section is redundant
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Delete: “those”
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Add: “People”
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Add: ““”
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Add: “””
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Delete: “a disorder or a chronic pain condition that is”
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Replace: “when there” with “due to”
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Delete: “It has been seen that Tt”
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Redundant
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