Sandisha Mandavilli added action items, comments, and suggestions to the following document 02222021-APC- Fibromyalgia | Resolved | | 1 action item, 2 comments, 9 accepted suggestions |
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Commentswidespread pain  | Abhishek Rakshithas been used 3 times in the 2 and 3rd paragraphs. need new phrase |
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ResolvedAction ItemsAffecting women more than it does men  | Abhishek Rakshit@sandishaworks@gmail.com Starting needs rephrasing Assigned to Sandisha Mandavilli |
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ReplyOpen Commentssaid  | Abhishek Rakshit |
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ReplyOpen t is also said to be  | Abhishek RakshitMaybe "Experts believe it is the second" |
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ReplyOpen Suggestions | Abhishek Rakshit |
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ReplyOpen  | Abhishek RakshitReplace: “is an extreme and chronic widespread pain condition that is” with “can be” |
 | Abhishek Rakshitthe removed section is redundant |
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ReplyOpen  | Abhishek RakshitDelete: “a disorder or a chronic pain condition that is” |
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ReplyOpen  | Abhishek RakshitReplace: “when there” with “due to” |
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ReplyOpen  | Abhishek RakshitDelete: “It has been seen that Tt” |
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